Starloid's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fantasia]

This one is definitely an eye catcher. You did a fine job here :)

Akari19 responds:

thanks, but this was just a test really. XD the real eye catcher is yet to come

[RikkeHansen Art Trade]

Good drawing! I like the pose you chose for this piece, fits very nicely. But a couple of things to keep an eye out for:

1.The repeating gaps in the shading make this piece feel like it was rushed towards the end, you could have done a better job there :)

2.The the glasses feel obtrusive, a good way to go about improving this would be letting the lenses have more dimension - They look as though you could poke her right though them! Try coloring in some lenses :9

Hope you have a nice day :)

GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks for the review! And yeah, I could've done a better job... D: And I've never drawn glasses before really, so I didn't know how to keep the glasses there, but not be THAT intrusive. But also being normal, non colored glasses. Hope you have a nice day too. :}

[Everything stays.....]

The softness of this piece is very soothing. It just makes me feel relaxed, ya know? Good work here. (P.S specially loving the way you have gone about giving the hair its silky texture :3)