Starloid's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fantasia]

This one is definitely an eye catcher. You did a fine job here :)

Akari19 responds:

thanks, but this was just a test really. XD the real eye catcher is yet to come

[RikkeHansen Art Trade]

Good drawing! I like the pose you chose for this piece, fits very nicely. But a couple of things to keep an eye out for:

1.The repeating gaps in the shading make this piece feel like it was rushed towards the end, you could have done a better job there :)

2.The the glasses feel obtrusive, a good way to go about improving this would be letting the lenses have more dimension - They look as though you could poke her right though them! Try coloring in some lenses :9

Hope you have a nice day :)

GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks for the review! And yeah, I could've done a better job... D: And I've never drawn glasses before really, so I didn't know how to keep the glasses there, but not be THAT intrusive. But also being normal, non colored glasses. Hope you have a nice day too. :}